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Can anyone please mark my Essay ?
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Can anyone please mark my Essay ?

Do you believe farmers are more important than Doctors? Well, If you do not beleive you should. Farmers plant trees and grow fruits whilst Doctors work in hospital to save lives. Nonetheless they are both doind the same job.

Firstly, It is beleiveable to say that there are farmers everywhere in the world and there are also Doctors everywhere in the world but why should they be compared and what do they have in common ? Farmers as we all know go trees and plant and these tree take in Carbon dioxide(CO2) which reduces the carbon foot prints for us humans in the world. If you look at farmers from another perspective, they are saving us, the environments and our surroundings; they are playing a role to protect us and by this farmers are growing crops aswell.

Doctors on the other hands we need them in our lives to make sure we are healthy and to treat when we are not healthy. Withouht doctors a lot of people will be dead and there will not be 7.6 billion people in there world be about half that amount. Without doctors there will be more tears in the world (more people will be crying due to their relative dieing), there will be more fighting(people will be going through extreme lenght and measures to get drugs to heal themselves and others around them)

by Emmanuel Ajadi
(this is imcomplete)