why me
the dark clouds enclosed them selves around me like firese preditors i starded at them in dissmay.my life was about to get worse. in 1 week i was about lose everything and everyone.
why me? what had i done to deserve this?
this how it all started.....
can someone plzzzz coment?
(i know my spelling is really bad!)
why me
the dark clouds enclosed them selves around me like firese preditors i starded at them in dissmay.my life was about to get worse. in 1 week i was about lose everything and everyone.
why me? what had i done to deserve this?
this how it all started.....
can someone plzzzz coment?
(i know my spelling is really bad!)
It's a really great opening and very mysterious
That is a great opening to your story. Its now a cliffhanger. I want to know want happens next. Its a mystery.
is that all of it?
if yes then its bit short also you need to make it a bot moreobvious what its about because atm its confusing
That is a really great opening to your story. Its now a cliffhanger. I want to know want happens next. Its a mystery.